Friday, August 24, 2018

Punks Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Welcome to the human race
your born with chains and die as waste
and in between you fight as law
tooth, smile and civilized claw
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Kevin Patrick
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Mj Lemon 03 September 2018

Kevin, this is just amazing. You've transported me decades, all the way back to a D.O.A concert. I can hear Joey Sh- - - now. Actually, this verse would be classic as a DOA cover. Too bad the group and especially Joey shifted back into such conventional politics.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2018

Kevin, such a well crafted poem....10++++

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