Punitive Action Comments

interesting Angel Heady19 minutes ago very well written poem. Comment +1 HARD TO FOLLOW RHYTHM WISE

Sean Spencer12 minutes ago I had a bit of trouble following it, just because of you're writing style, but unless I completely missed the point then I think you had some good points. it seemed to me you were saying that although we all come to this page to share with each other, we also hvae to be sure we don't baby one another. If a poet is to improve, we have to be shown what we're doing wrong. So if that's what you meant, then I totally agree! Comment +1 Better think twice.

Powerful message Marboogie Breathe23 hours ago Nicely written and I enjoyed the fact that you stated the truth and what you felt about issues in the world that many others have the same issue but may not know how to voice it. That is what I love about poetry. Articulated well too. Comment +1 Very informative and povacative and more importantly true

Very informative and povacative and more importantly true Ronnie Clifton4 minutes ago Mr. Mehta spoke his mind and the mind of many others about the political system that has forgotten about the people that it is supposed to protect and serve. His poem was informative and heart wrenching. Comment +1 good

Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi4 minutes ago state of affairs, well things are messed up, even literate act insane............ Comment +1 =)

Marcos Estrada6 minutes ago nice flow of words

Only intellectuals work in imagery direction Where exists no ground for any action