Saturday, May 16, 2009

Punishment For A Life Term..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hearing your voice I woke up
then realized it can't be
because Iam deaf
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Miriam Maia Padua 23 May 2009

nice ideas shared...sad but with amusing thoughts... really impressive.. and....so interesting to read... makes me smile on the last stanza... 10++++

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Tess Macapagal 22 May 2009

nice one tine, , , like very much, , , meaningful........

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Winnie Angel 21 May 2009

rare piece..quite different and thoughtful...................i can only say its wondrful! ..

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Naidz Ladia 16 May 2009

this piece of yours is a beautiful one..this will go to my fav..this is improving dear, really improving..full of sense..the stanzas with 3 lines express different meanings from that of the 4,5,7 lined stanza..this is admirable, adorable and we can get lesson out of it..naizz

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