Punishment For A Life Term..... Comments

nice ideas shared...sad but with amusing thoughts... really impressive.. and....so interesting to read... makes me smile on the last stanza... 10++++

nice one tine, , , like very much, , , meaningful........

rare piece..quite different and thoughtful...................i can only say its wondrful! ..

this piece of yours is a beautiful one..this will go to my fav..this is improving dear, really improving..full of sense..the stanzas with 3 lines express different meanings from that of the 4,5,7 lined stanza..this is admirable, adorable and we can get lesson out of it..naizz