Friday, August 22, 2008

Punishment Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Unwanted feelings
Destroyed thinking
Shattered breaths
Inhaling tears
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Asif Baloch
Punishment
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Clum Haire 20 September 2008

Thanks for your comment! This poem is really good, the short lines lend themselves well to the emotional style. Its almost like when people are sobbing and its hard to breathe. Its really effective and even though its got the odd clichee in it, I barely noticed. I'd give it 10

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Asif Baloch

Asif Baloch

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