Punctuation Pens, I Pause Comments

this reads like poems from maya angelo. yet it si about punctuation.. definitely a WOW

i am my poem, my poem is me....i identify with this...

wow, iread this earlier but didnt know it was yours, wow. not just good but great. perfect, in all ways

Very good flow. Well written with a nice choice of words. It has feeling and creativity. I really don't see anything wrong with it. The syllables are evenly matched to make the rhyming lines equal. VERY good job. One of the best I have read. I would give it a 10.

Wow; an engrossing, breathless thing that rhymes, and rhymes more seamlessly than just about anything in this style, and I want you to know I am just in awe of this; the lines, the title, the idea..it all fits together so tightly. It's in my favorites now because, well, quite simply that's about the only option I have, other than plastering it all over the walls around the place I write poems..(not such a bad idea, either..) smile

Its a nice one. I enjoyed it.