Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Punctuation Marks Comments

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The full stop and the comma
Had an argument.
The full stop said, “It’s over! ”
But the comma would not relent.
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Tan Pratonix
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Lynn Petty 26 October 2017

Hi Tan, That poem is fantastic and, as a humorous poem, it is worth publishing in any magazine in existence. I am fighting Cancer and I cannot read as I would like but, reading your poems raise my appreciation for life. I shall read more of yours and comment later. Regards, Lynn Thank you

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Tom Billsborough 03 October 2016

this is quite brilliant Tan. Bet James Joyce would have loved it! Especially the last line. I certainly did! Both ingenious and very funny too! Make it a favourite.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Bizarre! What a marvellous speculation it is! Brilliant depiction about Punctuation Marks that appears as human actors. Thrilling and stunning one. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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