Friday, February 1, 2008

Pulse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Onset of this phenomenon was with very little initiation
Each gait had its elegant look and depth to be submerged
And there were no qualms and no vacillation in the heart
My Pulse quivered to come in contact with this alluring dawn.
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Raj Nandy 07 March 2009

The last para thoughtfully and beautifully sums up the philosophy of life! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 January 2009

This is very fine work, Vidi...I am surprised to find that this posting got past the eye's of so many.If i could make a suggsetion...that you cut / paste & repost this pen-gem with the word(Re-Post) parathesised, as shown, here, directly next to the title.'PULSE' Post it when you see names on line that you know like to read you...I'll bet you get a lot of reads, along with much positive feedback. Yes, i concur with your dartingly philosophical message on establishing the theoretical Yin/Yang mantra, in obtaining inner-peace, self-control, and general stability in life....Excellent penning, young lady! F j R 2009

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