Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Pull The Trigger Comments

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I felt the gun behind me,
You pushed it against my back.
I knew you would pull the trigger.
You were insane.
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Rachel Brewer
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James Mclain 12 May 2009

I loved the ending starting a new life together..who wants to wait around in the next one..iip

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Sarah Sanchez 12 May 2009

hmm i kinda liked it. the beggining was very good but at the end..pull the trigger and start a new life.and change everything. we cant change what was done. what is done is DONE. i like it tho :) keep writing.

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