Thursday, May 10, 2007

Pull Of Love Comments

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Across the room she sits
Her eyes and mine collide
She smiles
A gentle smile
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Bob Oldfield
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So short and simple yet so meaningful...I think we all can relate to this feeling at some point in our lives, of feeling we have went through love at first sight! Well written poem with a great message about how love or something else? can slip into your heart with just a gesture and not a word......... Thanx for sharing and thanx for your kind review of my poem Apology... keep up the great work Bob. =Shelley=

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Bob Oldfield

Bob Oldfield

Liverpool, UK / Vernon, BC
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