Pulchritudinous Life Comments

a love to nature and beyond a love true he made love to us Heaven will come here

your writes inspired me more...you have a powerful imagination and wisdom...

There is a directness that is quite poignant.

Wilting (An offering to the flower girl) She wants her warrant posted: made for pursuit. Prison cage security, for canary-like compatibility. Woman’s rectified femininity, she wants a warden. She has admiration for the law, character eclipse. Abrupt, she demands to be reckoned by the hour, with harsh slapped numbers, beyond the cheek. © RH Peat 1/21/2012 9: 30pm Form 3 tercets/ 9 lines/ A Parody In Response: Rachel Ann Butler, hugs and kisses for her: Burgeon

I like this poem Rachel, very nice work!

i like the way its written...an encouragement for double minds

pheme of a sweet lady with void A lady with lady’s resolve, I esteem him, For the sake that I esteem him.