Puddles Of Madness Comments

Nice idea for a poem cordell

Lovely metaphore, puddles says so many things, I like your minimalistic writng

i am sad to say i have been on both sides of these feelings.... mostly giving unknowingly. good work

Once again in few words you have managed to paint a clear image in my mind. Well done

is it true that there is no place never visited... it is my place... any one else was an intruder..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Striking images here!