Thursday, October 2, 2008

Puddles Comments

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The leaves do lie in puddles on the pavement,
And flow in river gutters down the drain,
I myself am feeling down and lonesome,
As I walk alone in pouring rain.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ann Beard 11 October 2008

Another lovely poem Andrew, very touching and sad. your words leave footprints. Thank you. Ann

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Duncan Wyllie 07 October 2008

Very moving writing here Andrew, I know how that feels, but tomorrow, a little sunshine perhaps? Love duncan X

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Lynda Robson 06 October 2008

Sad and touching Andrew, a very atmospheric write, puddles can also be fun for young children who can't resist splashing in them, 10 Lynda xx

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Thad Wilk 03 October 2008

A touching poem and story Andrew! Splendidly written as always! Great write! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! ! Friend Thad

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David Threadgold 02 October 2008

Hi Andrew. A sad lonely tale. so well written I can feel the rain running down my the back of my neck. A great read thanks. must be a 10 Regards Dave T

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