Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Pudding Delight! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love marriage
But grandpa against it.
Grandsons friend convinces,
The girl is well mannered
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

This is very interesting and brilliant story poem. While the evening darkens comes life needs light and importance is felt. Social perception about love marriage is wisely painted in expression of words. After all Grandpa is a Grandpa. He settles marriage beautifully. Love settled for arrange marriage by effort of grandpa is interesting...10

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2014

A very interesting poem, enjoyed it.

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Ramesh Rai 07 August 2013

i like pudding. also like the pudding of poetry more delighted.make this pudding more sweetest n delighted.

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Heather Wilkins 01 August 2013

the last stanza fills in the void and answers the question. done. nice

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Dinesan Madathil 31 July 2013

Simple poem giving an account of a family tale of its own. The pudding is delicious. See that the verb sequence is followed henceforth.

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Dave Walker 31 July 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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