still as a lake frozen in time
i sat in the audience
the time is here thaw i must
my inside roll as with sweat off a glass
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Chenna you've voiced the stagefright I felt the first two times I got up to the mike now however the chance to read imy works to an audience I welcomed every time
If I said I truly understood this poem, I would be lying. Therefore, I must give it a 7 and no recommendation. GW62
The moments - frozen in time - then suddenly released. You have it there. Well done my friend.