Sunday, August 24, 2008

Public Speaking Comments

Rating: 4.5

still as a lake frozen in time
i sat in the audience
the time is here thaw i must
my inside roll as with sweat off a glass
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Chenna Linda
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Shaun William Hayes 05 November 2011

The moments - frozen in time - then suddenly released. You have it there. Well done my friend.

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Harry Couchon Jr 14 October 2008

Chenna you've voiced the stagefright I felt the first two times I got up to the mike now however the chance to read imy works to an audience I welcomed every time

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

A beautiful poem, nice.

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

If I said I truly understood this poem, I would be lying. Therefore, I must give it a 7 and no recommendation. GW62

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