Public, Oh, Public! Jubilant Republic Day! (Part-2) Comments

Happy Republic Day!

As Vipin says you have covered all that has to be said...my best wishes to you for a bright future poetry..10/10

'When patriotism lived on papers and not in heart Corruption and hypocrisy did never depart; ' Perfect truthful lines! So well done its insane! :)

Oh no, A lot of things you portarited here in this poem, , , (Human Rights, Patriotism, Curruption and hypocrisy, freedom and so on) All I can say that, it's a fantastic poem! 10++++ You write about some serious issues or the things that are floating in a Nation today! ! Good rhythm and rhymes.. I like this poem very much, ,