Monday, June 24, 2013

Pubdom Comments

Rating: 4.3

Jack sat into the tub
With beer and music on
Dreamy posters all around
Dancing with Ecstasy
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Patricia Grantham 12 July 2013

Sounds like Jack is having a heck of a good time. Let the good times roll in the kingdom of Pubdom. So hilarious. Enjoyed.

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Wahab Abdul 25 June 2013

nice and read with one breath, , , that means the poem has its great flow.. love it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2013

One is emperor of one's own kingdom of life. Nice short poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 June 2013

world of fantasy, good write my dear friend. please read my new poems.

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