Thursday, February 7, 2008

Pub Brawl Comments

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'Wat'cha lookin' at?
I'd had enough of this loud mouthed lout,
and his pissed-out-of-mind billigerence;
So my repartee needed to be swift:
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jerry hughes
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Amie-Lee ...... 12 November 2008

Excellent! ! ! This is a perfect representation of a typical pub brawl, and trust me, growing up with an alcoholic for a father, I've seen my fair share of pub brawls already :)

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Alison Cassidy 07 February 2008

You tell it like it is Jezza and your comic comfortableness with the Australian vernacular is second to none. You capture your mindless brawling Aussie drunk with definitive skill in this great knock-about read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Craig Anderson 07 February 2008

Brilliant piece. Excellent conclusion too. Best Regards. Craig.

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