Monday, January 25, 2010

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Rating: 2.2

My eyes hide secrets.

The thought of us sets me aflame and Im ashamed to say that my heart still beats,
slowly beats,
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Elizabeth Tyease Collins
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as even from my absence from this site your writings are always transforming and reforming into perfection....awesome poem as things never changed :)

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kitty in love 30 January 2010

wow... i give you a 10/10... keep writing. i love your poems

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Afzal Shauq 26 January 2010

what a sweet piece is this one..i read and liked and let me say you are doing a good job..best of luck 10/10

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Adam Reed 26 January 2010

dayyuummmm girl. that was THE SHIT! ! ! i really liked the beginning with my eyes hide secrets and i freakin loved the inbetween rhyme catches with 'aflame and im ashamed' that was truly badass. hope u write more soon =)

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i really like this poem :) good job! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Lovesick (Ewing) , Nj
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