Sunday, November 8, 2009

***psychotic Little Girl~ Comments

Rating: 2.3

I planted my feet among the earth and the streets
grew morose,
the scent of sweet surrender filtered my nose,
just a child so cold,
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Elizabeth Tyease Collins
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Daniela Daraz 29 November 2009

deep and intense. the mysteriousness of it all is good, but just remember to keep it under control. Don't forget to address it's meaning and its cause.

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Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Lovesick (Ewing) , Nj
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