From: Sadiqullah Khan
To: Nivedita Bagchi
Date-Time: 12/23/2009 4: 47: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: A Nobel Prize
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neat-precise-hits the nails where it hurts and words make all the sound defintely 10++++++
As usual a bold poetry To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry/Else are Scary/Parry /Fury…’ sarcastically rhymed ‘The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary. ‘…and so indeed for a committed and confirmed poet. 10++ Dr. V.
‘I do dare/To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry’ Thumbs up to your poetic venture… Tried to stay nude and truthful to your emotion … No concoction pretension and reservation…that’s the spirit As reader I whole heartedly support it. Nice reading experience. 10+
‘…Ms. Nivedita/A wee lorry/The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary.’ Yeah you’re Lory [Australasian parrots having a brush-tipped tongue for feeding on nectar]… But origin is India…the country of oldest wisdom and ageless culture Reflected in her refuse in Poetry-Sanctuary the most coveted place To be feed on nectar the aesthetic fluid for every poet.9 10++
Pure and sensible Human emotions And feelings Applause Congrats wonderful abstract poem, powerful ideas to convey the message 10++++++++++++
Amazed by Poets' interpersonal relation and interaction… No envy…no rat race…no blaspheme.....just read and enjoy… Both Poets are with open stream-lined without any twirl eddies in psyche…/ heart Hats off to both poets…cheers
i wish you all the best in your work...you are indeed a poet willing to chalenge the world using your wit, humor, and knowledge of the craft. congratulations
I wish you many more awards for your contributions like this to the poetry world.
I sincerely congratulate 1st to Poet Sadiqullah Khan [PSK] for ‘embosoming’ this poem and writing a poem on it… 2ndly I congratulate Poet Ms. Nivedita for ‘crowning’ poem [A Nobel Prize] of PSK 3rdly PSK again wrote a poem titled as My New Year Bouquet… Excellent fellow feelings and congrats to both the poets. AB London Copy to PSK
gives new style in composing and contemplation.especially in the second paragraph the words are arrayed fastidiously..nice
To Poet S. Khan, Thanks for your honor to me…and I’ve read your poem ‘A Nobel Prize’ where you’ve clubbed this poem …a big poetic heart …hats off to you Sir. Ms. Nivedita UK
Subtly Poet Niv tried to convey that in symbolically-hypothetical-2500-BC’ life was not so much under the lens of.Paparazzo’s, spy cams…scoops…media…and so on. Modernity has pirated our ‘intimate-ultimate-sublimate-innate’ Privacy we no more can laugh LOUDLY …open our heart fully lest we’ll be exposed, laughed, cut a sorry figure or my weakness will be surfaced and time pressure! All are ‘measured-programmed’… we’re plastered psychosomatically by the red eyes of petticoat of etiquette and foolish mannerism and clichéd modernism etc. Create unnecessary aura arrogance grandiose around us…’See how important I’m’ [factually I’m unimportant LOL! ]. Thank you Poet for your insight. dr.sakti
niv,2500bc lol this is an excellent poem sexy in poetry love it 10
A Nobel Prize I As on today 24 Dec,2500 BC Being the head Of the committee Where a beautiful poem PSYCHOSOMATIC LIGERIE By MS. NIVEDETA BAGCHI SPC.UK. Has been submitted For review And I hereby Bestow upon her And she is Very kind To accept A NOBEL PRIZE For the reasons That she has written Pure and sensible Human emotions And feelings Applause Congrats ........ 24/12/2009
Hi Niv - Thank you for another lovely evocative poem. V 1 Is very true Privacy &Intimacy are very rare. V 2 We can be risque in poetry - this verse is packed with innuendo 'scary - parry - fury - lurid - hunger' Awesome - I love it. V 3 We all love your poetry NIV and we do respect your Emotional Sanctuary. Love it - it scores a TEN on all counts. Love you lots in poetry - JOHN X X X
Bold and precise. A wonderful interaction of two poets. Well done, lovely! A crown for both! ; D