Sunday, December 4, 2016

Psychedelic World... Comments

Rating: 3.6

Psychedelic World

With emerald skies
and crimson sea's
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Unwritten Soul 29 January 2017

Amazing, love the colorful explosion with the beautiful rhyming you did here....wonderful world is bolder with bolder thoughts :) thanks Annette

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

God Paints Light Into Energy Lifeforms God paints intense to subtle colours shading into out of a human visible spectrum range narrow visible light but God exploration curious ranges; in electromagnetic radiation from exciting infrared longer wavelengths to stunning ultraviolet shorter wavelengths human sight originates in visible light; sunlight streaming through space a short eight and a half minute journey from our sun our star life gifting energy photosynthesis; for green plants to produce create sugars mostly in the form of starches which releases energy into animals eating food chain plants; God paints intense to subtle colours shading into out of a human visible spectrum range God invented an original first creator's artistic palette rainbow colours swimming in an artists mind beauty; is the pot of gold rainbows end memories mint coined historically the moon stars illuminated night skies dark nights fires danced shadows in campfire minds torches lamps candles became personal hand carried stars; stimulating fire brand flickering torches alive time danced on shadow cave walls moving into tallow bees wax candles fat burned oils whale oil burned into romantic kerosene lamps; magic electric lights neon lights laser lights clever humanity creates artificial lights aping animals generating bioluminescence fireflies use light to locate lure mates vampire squids use light to hide; from tentacle grasped prey while humanity uses light to turn primeval night into rational reasoned safer day rainbow coloured cities illuminated with colurful artifical light; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

Hiding Or Glorifying In Sight Light fireflies use light to locate lure mates vampire squids use light to hide blind predation tentacle grasped prey confused; while humanity uses light to turn primeval night into rational reasoned safer day rainbow coloured cities illuminated with colurful artifical magical light; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

Light Sources Illuminate Purpose Survival Choices bees wax candles fat burned oils whale oil burned into romantic kerosene lamps; magic electric lights neon city lights laser industrial lights clever creative humanity; creates artificial lights aping nature light source animals generating bioluminescence; fireflies use light to locate lure mates vampire squids; use purpose light to hide ambush tentacle grasped predation prey; while humanity uses light to turn primeval dangerous night into rational reasoned safer day; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

Once Cave Painted Walls Flame Danced Flickering Mysteries stimulating fire brand flickering torches alive time danced on shadow cave walls moving into tallow fat wax lamps light spoke sight imagination animals from cave artist hands... into called roaming herds hunted into mind space dimensions spears leaped from cave spiritual hunt walls into prey bodies life mastery hunter gathers controled life spirit survival feasts... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

Torches Lamps Were Ancient Personal Hand Carried Stars historically the moon stars illuminated days end night skies dark nights fires danced shadows in campfire flame minds lit torches lamps candles became personal hand carried stars Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

An Artist Mimics Genius Cosmos Design Fabric Tapestries God paints visible invisible intense to subtle colours shading into out of a human visible perception spectrum range sight... God invented an original first creator's artistic palette rainbow colours swimming... in an artist's mind beauty is the pot of gold rainbows end memories mint coined... in the beauty of mind vision dreams an artist perceives creation possibilites mimics genius cosmos design fabric tapestries... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

Light Illuminates Spaces Illuminates Life Diversity Possibilities sunlight streaming through space a short eight and a half minute journey from our sun our star life gifting energy photosynthesis... for green plants to produce create sugars mostly in the form of starches which releases energy into animals eating food chain plants... light allows plants to grow in mystic sunlight moonlight light allows heat for warmth for water in free state to flow light illuminates spaces illuminates life diversity possibilities... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 28 January 2017

God Paints In A Stunning Spectrum Range God paints intense to subtle colours shading into out of a human visible spectrum range narrow visible light... God exploration curious ranges in electromagnetic radiation from exciting infrared longer wavelengths... to stunning ultraviolet shorter wavelengths human sight originates in sun visible light enabling humanity to see by day sleep by night... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 12 January 2017

Beauty Is Panorama Pot Of Gold Brushstrokes nature painted with vision an artist's palette rainbow colours swimming in an artist's mind beauty is panorama pot of gold brushstrokes Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Psychedelic World...' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Terry Craddock 11 January 2017

'With emerald skies and crimson sea's purple mountains swoop's down to the sea, with golden rivers straddled with ease by rainbow coloured trees' nature painted with an artists palette, rainbow colours swimming in an artists mind, beauty is the pot of gold

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Tom Billsborough 17 December 2016

Marvellous evocation of colour. I'm a big fan of Merete Bate, a friend of mine, who is an International painter. She has a site on the Internet. She really celebrates colour as you do. I love this poem, Annette. It's on my favourites' list now.

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Bill Cantrell 11 December 2016

Colors of the rainbow Are now an ocean in your pen On butterflies wings, Tracers of peace, Where images have no end. Well done Annette, I especially enjoyed this one.

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2016

Nature's world with all its' charm and mystery creates a strange connection with our self and mesmerizes us with its' power. Your poem expresses this effect so beautifully. A 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2016

Down to the sea! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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