Sunday, September 3, 2006

Proximity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let us be this close tonight.
Let us blur out the boundaries;
Let us dissolve the barriers;
Let you and me be us tonight.
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Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

a beautifully structured poem. n i agree with peter that this poem reads like a spell. Reuben.

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Peter A. Crowther 27 September 2006

Great poem! Reads like a magical spell or incantation

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Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2006

Beautiful words of love and light, Awesome by design and content Love duncan X

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