Thursday, January 23, 2020

Provincial Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some poets think that it's a crime
If all your lines refuse to rhyme
They snub their nose and simply scoff
and pack their faces down their troughs
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Kevin Patrick
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Susan Williams 16 February 2020

I admire those who can make a poem flow sensibly even though they end line rhyme- -my end line rhymes always sound either stiff or nonsensical. I really admire those who can fit their thought to the beat of a meter- -tried it once, said nevermore. All in all I love to try to mold my thoughts to the form of new styles- -it's fun. But I stake my horse out to pasture in the free range of free verse- -

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Leeann Azzopardi 24 January 2020

Kevin it is wonderful the poems, and to see you again Can you read read mine?

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 January 2020

A well scribed poem that conveys the message of excellence...10+++

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 24 January 2020

poetry in global age has a wide range of pattern fine

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Tulsi Shrestha 24 January 2020

Rhymes flow from the womb of rhythm. Beautifully rhymed splendid creation.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 January 2020

For All Poetry is a delicacy. This is definitely very true. You have expressed your brilliance in this excellent poem.10

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Kingsley Egbukole 23 January 2020

Interesting perspective. Simply writing is joy for me. Beautiful

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