Saturday, July 5, 2014

Providence - Born In Fire Comments

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How can the sun be so high in the sky
While i'm down here dull, barely alive
Why does it get to shine so brightly
When I try my hardest and all my efforts spite me
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 July 2014

An amazing starry poem., star dust sci fi type! Yor last line was great too. Pls review my latest poem too

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Great imagery........Leila......optimism shining......a disposition to look on the more positive sides of life.................. nice composition

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