How can the sun be so high in the sky
While i'm down here dull, barely alive
Why does it get to shine so brightly
When I try my hardest and all my efforts spite me
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Great imagery........Leila......optimism shining......a disposition to look on the more positive sides of life.................. nice composition
An amazing starry poem., star dust sci fi type! Yor last line was great too. Pls review my latest poem too