Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Prove Your Love On Me [part I] Comments

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It's difficult, I can't decide;
If I'll give up or I would fight
For I was hurt and I am tired
Of the promises that you would change
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Julie Vines
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Chinedu Dike 30 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Vine.

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Renssey Heart Vine 02 October 2012

yes i will, . and i would be thankful for him, because he is the the reason why i discover myself written a poet.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 October 2012

I feel sorry for you, RHV and this poem is too sad, but we don't have to be unhappy remembering someone else misdoing! so be cheerful!

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