Wednesday, August 31, 2005

Prove It Comments

Rating: 3.7

'What a nice guy',
were the thoughts
that hung around
my early morning
...
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 September 2005

Yes, Mary but the gentleman hasn't discovered the poem as yet. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 31 August 2005

If I had a name like Sara Watshername and an attitude like her/him and couldn't write poetry (or much else) I would find a tall tree (please not a willow) and hang myself after carving my initials into the bark. H

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Sara Watson-Roy 31 August 2005

..and digressions....

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Mary Nagy 31 August 2005

Does this mean the war is ended by the 'gentlemen'? ? Hopefully....Nicely written Herbert, this is a very nice poem regardless of the situation in reality. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Uriah Hamilton 31 August 2005

H, I like your language and tone in this one.

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