Sunday, May 26, 2013

Proud To Be Lazy... Comments

Rating: 3.9

My mom says that
I'm too lazy,
No matter if the weather is
or is not hazy..
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Akanksha Bhatt
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Mukund 09 July 2018

Loving that poem keep it up

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Akanksha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Robert Alston Jr 01 December 2014

It takes a word that has an otherwise negative connotation and allows it to prove that negative words do not have to effect the person. The speaker knows who she is regardless of being called lazy by mom. The speaker is certain that she is the opposite of what is negative about the word Lazy. A single word does not define who we are only we do and we might define ourselves with several words of different meanings linked to deeper feelings within ourselves. Laziness in this case serves a purpose, it gets something done in an easy way the idea is to relax in it, take it easy inside of what's getting done and let things flow as easy as the breeze.

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Shahzia Batool 03 May 2014

Akanksha :))))))))))

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Rajendra Singh Rathore 09 April 2014

A lazy one can do a hard job in an easy way... It doesn't matter at all, Before that he would stay.. Nice line..................

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Ahatisham Alam 02 April 2014

nice proud of being lazy. into this world broad field of battle into the bivauc of life be not like dumb driven cattle Be a hero and strife. but you have to be a heroine.

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Biplab Singha 30 March 2014

Ha..ha..ha I like your thought to be lazy.

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Md Elias Uddin 29 March 2014

A lazy one can do a hard job in an easy way... It doesn't matter at all, Before that he would stay.. Nice! Remain lazy for ever! Don't listen to mom or others. They don't know nothing!

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Tanya Gupta 27 March 2014

good poem, nice rhymes

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V P Mahur 27 March 2014

Dear Akanksha, Thanks for your comments. in this poem you have entire changed the concept of being lazy, Thanks. Keep in touch and enjoy my new poems every day.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

I don't care if people call me crazy, just because I am very PROUD TO BE LAZY... nice lines...10 be lazy but remain busy approach lazy but remain steady get well on top with lightening speed

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Abhishek Mishra 23 September 2013

Really enjoyed reading it...nice poem: -)

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Neela Nath Das 17 September 2013

You should be.Because, where's life behind the heap of books!

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Diwakar Bhatt 30 May 2013

good.....peppy poem suits to ur age...

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Vijay Sai R 27 May 2013

its so beautiful...i enjoy being lazy

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Utsav Patel 27 May 2013

Its a simple one... You can do much better... Keep writing...

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Akanksha Bhatt

Akanksha Bhatt

Dehradun India
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