'You are un-FUCKING-believable,
you know that? '
The morning after
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Tongue planted firmly in cheek. This is a great piece Neil. The flow allows for each stanza to blend into the next. The pacing is wonderful and the use of language is great. Love it! Oh, also it's very funny.
Oh my God..U sumed it up so well for me..Oustanding..Good one
Excellent write Neil, you should know better than hooking up with a poet anyway! rofl No sympathy. You lucky guy, grinning at you a quiet type! Tai
This is another stunner, Neil! and oh-so-true!
Thoroughly enjoyed this one, Neil. It left me feeling very angry, as if I had been there, written it myself and felt the same things. I agree with everything you said. Well done. Love, Fran xx