Sunday, November 26, 2017

Proud Perfection Comments

Rating: 4.5

Is there a thing as perfect to find,
a perfect proud thing?
I, have failed to find
I grind the grains of reasoning
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Yashim George
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Yashim. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Yashim George 13 December 2017

Your reviews are as butter on a frying pan, thanks a lot....

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2017

A witty reflection on the essence and beauty of the sun. Beautiful piece of poetry nicely brought forth in good diction with conviction. Brilliant, very brilliant. Thanks for sharing Yashim.

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Beautiful poem Yashim Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Yashim George 26 November 2017

Thanks Mario.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 26 November 2017

Imaginary world expounding real nature with our living. Good work

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Yashim George 26 November 2017

Thanks a lot Kumar.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2017

Such an interesting write, Yashim...10++++

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Yashim George 26 November 2017

Great Bernard, thanks a lot.

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