My son, at your birth
You are like a jewel
Instills an innate mirth
An aura ringing a bell
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I do like the way you describe the flowing of your feeling - like a waterfall. This is a wonderful tribute to your son. Irene
Beautiful flowing poetry for a much adored son...thanks for sharing this Marvin...10+++
An ecstatic tribute to a dearly loved son - from birth to graduation. The reader can truly feel the 'pride flowing in you like waterfalls'. Congratulations Marvin. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
congratulations to you both.............made each other proud.....wellpenned