Saturday, March 21, 2009

((((Proud Father)) Comments

Rating: 5.0

My son, at your birth
You are like a jewel
Instills an innate mirth
An aura ringing a bell
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Reshma Ramesh 31 March 2009

congratulations to you both.............made each other proud.....wellpenned

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Irene Clark-hogg 23 March 2009

I do like the way you describe the flowing of your feeling - like a waterfall. This is a wonderful tribute to your son. Irene

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Fiona Davidson 21 March 2009

Beautiful flowing poetry for a much adored son...thanks for sharing this Marvin...10+++

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Alison Cassidy 21 March 2009

An ecstatic tribute to a dearly loved son - from birth to graduation. The reader can truly feel the 'pride flowing in you like waterfalls'. Congratulations Marvin. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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