Prototype Of Man Comments

thanks for sharing.... i rated your poems 10

'Where dreams lie'...just advice as dreams are multiple...we have many dreams right not just one ie 'dream'...I'd look to rewrite that so everything falls in place grammatically and in theory...just my 5 cents sweetheart ;) 9+

You go Sheldon...very good rhyme and word placement. I enjoyed it...Remember to alway's alway's proof read ur work.

Amazing and thoughtful. Great poem. =)

Trees could be similar to a man Like trees need nature desperately just like human Many to mention and to discuss no need to press There’s no completive discord between man and trees' Good thoughts of write between man and trees Well penned. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing wit me

I can't agree more! Really a charming one! ~ I like trees, and I think trees have some unbelievable spirits and characteristics. They are genius on our earth. Live as we do.

wow u are amazing u just inspired me real talk keep da work coming

So touching especially on global warming phenomenon...I do hope and pray that this Poem be posted and be reflected in every symposium in every Universities and Colleges in all schools today....congratulation... God bless.....A 10 +++

I love the compariosn made here between trees and man - - a complex of hopes, and valour mixed with stem and root etc.- - excellent conception.... very well presented Trees are a wonder in themselves but alongside a human they together are a powerhouse of energy for life.

beautiful poem wel compossed and the comparison seems possible

Trees gives us air to breath and so do we give back them the same. Without trees we don't exist and so do they. Nice thought, well penned.