Thursday, May 24, 2018

Protects (Lanterne #3) Comments

Rating: 5.0

She
protects
herself now
from words of love,
...
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Carl Roussell
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Aqua Flower 27 May 2018

Excellent poem about love. Sometimes poetry has more impact when it is short and to the point! This one is one of them! Nicely done! 10

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Carl Roussell 27 May 2018

Thank you Rainbow Flower. I am having so much fun learning more about poetry here, but it is the shorter styles that really appeal. Often if I try to make the piece too long the message becomes diluted and kind of gets lost.

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Trenton, Ontario
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