Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Prostitution Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dont belong to your affluent society
nor do I live at your mercy
A victim of social circumstances
You sell your art and I bank on my flesh
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smriti jha
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J Pe 19 September 2011

Man's consciousness is dictated by the society. However, our subconsciousness where the freewill resides is strong and steadfast...Anyway, nice topic to write on. you made a poetic touch there! keep on. thanks. waiting for your visit.

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Diwakar Bhatt 08 July 2011

it is poetry............well written thought...

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Biff Mcguire 22 June 2011

A bit shocking to start but it is self explanitory, society is much too cruel Ten again!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A crime in the dark of the night' on page 1. Akmal

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