Prosody Blues (Modernist) Comments

Very nicely worded deep thoughts conveyed in few words

Although I am not a fan of free form the very formlessness enhances your meassage

A fine example of 'less is more'. Your most important line is 'just our lives - explicable presence'. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

With this succinct piece you have hit so many things at the same time…like a modern poem it generates many meanings…the modern poems have no rhythm, no pattern in rhyme or meter and in reality our life too resembles today works of art, a reflection of the contemporary…an intelligent poem, liked it…. **Abha**

very powerful dude....in such a short amount of writing too....i think you may have just captured the meaning of life.10/10

A profound bouquet of well-chosen words and placement. Also, I like the header in your profile about being civil and honest.

touching poem, so poignant :)