As she ascended the stairs,
pausing for a moment. Standing on
the balcony reflecting on yesterday.
She turned momentarily, her eyes
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Beautifully expressed the sentiments natural for any woman who feels slightly shocked and dejected (jealous) to see the man, whom she had once held close to her heart, waltzing with a lovely lady!
Was it an illusion, wishful thinking or was the other person feeling the same? We will never know but a lovely poem none the less.
Poetry is the face of today. You presented a beautiful Poem. Is it reality or illusion? A thought provoking question.
Illusion in life fenced with time tied with memories lovely tale through a poem Thank to share 10
A great poem, was it an illusion or was it time travel or was it a dream. A fantastic write.
A moment in time of huge significance to one person in the crowd. You have described this heart-stopping moment in rich detail as a poet, Heather, and it could even belong in a novel or a film. Poignant and mysterious, and great to read.
Heather this is a lovely piece its mysterious and leaves me wanting to know more. beautiful