Friday, November 15, 2013

Prose The Face Of Yesterday Comments

Rating: 5.0

As she ascended the stairs,
pausing for a moment. Standing on
the balcony reflecting on yesterday.
She turned momentarily, her eyes
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Heather Burns
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Noreen Carden 29 November 2013

Heather this is a lovely piece its mysterious and leaves me wanting to know more. beautiful

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Valsa George 21 November 2013

Beautifully expressed the sentiments natural for any woman who feels slightly shocked and dejected (jealous) to see the man, whom she had once held close to her heart, waltzing with a lovely lady!

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David Wood 16 November 2013

Was it an illusion, wishful thinking or was the other person feeling the same? We will never know but a lovely poem none the less.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 November 2013

Poetry is the face of today. You presented a beautiful Poem. Is it reality or illusion? A thought provoking question.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 November 2013

Illusion in life fenced with time tied with memories lovely tale through a poem Thank to share 10

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Dave Walker 15 November 2013

A great poem, was it an illusion or was it time travel or was it a dream. A fantastic write.

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Susy Evelyne 15 November 2013

A moment in time of huge significance to one person in the crowd. You have described this heart-stopping moment in rich detail as a poet, Heather, and it could even belong in a novel or a film. Poignant and mysterious, and great to read.

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