Proposal (Complicated Delivery) Comments

The poem is thought provoking, as is the note at the end of it. The caption is captivating.

First of all, I found it quite amusing that I had a spot of trouble trying to follow the link to this poem so it put a meaning into the phrase complicated delivery before the poem had even been read. The image is a well manipulated allegory and the focus on birth/newness is unmissable. There are no questions asked it seems because there can be no answers, in the same way we can never comprehend and predict the effect that our unborn words would have had. However, I must cease to use the general our now as it seems an intensly personal and private thought of a poem. I think firstly because unspoken words are only known and pondered by those who think them and secondly because of the maternal theme. It was an unexpected experience like (temporal stasis really) to get behing your eyes and see through the dark of your pupil.