Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Proposal Comments

Rating: 3.6

Will thou dine with me?
A question I seek to ask,
Will thou let me be thy fool?
As my heart seeks that task.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Emma Adamyan 28 December 2009

so romantic poem, a mystic... what abt kissing over the lake? it`s better, try it :)

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Ashwin Satyal 24 November 2009

love da poem amigo! ! ! i adore ur writting skills! ! :)

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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

great poem, a classic look....of mixed archaic and modern language....nice poem shared! ! !

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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