Monday, March 13, 2006

Prophet Of Chaos Comments

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Am I too much for you?
Oh, so now you have to think and feel and understand the chaos of the world.
Does it hurt?
Can’t you deal with the pain, now that I’ve opened your eyes?
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Jack Dylan
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Will Barber 16 May 2006

You are definitely too much for me - gales of laughter, heeheeer, as I read your biography, the passages of a Life. Your wit (I stole the compliment from TS Eliotttttttttttttt who was commenting on the verse(s) of Herrrrrbert and Donne (Done, Jack?) leading me to a new dawn although I should be in bed now and my left (behind you) finger has become glued to a key in my left (-handed) keyboard zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Sweet dreams Will (still be here to morrow I can only hope..........

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***** ********* 21 March 2006

Very Punk attitude in this poem Jack. I recognise the philosophy. 10 from original punket Tai

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Sydney Daniels 18 March 2006

Wow. Intensity all around. Sometimes it is easier to see things in others that you don't recognize in yourself. Great write, Jack!

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