Tuesday, August 20, 2013

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It was around fifteen hundred years back
When the earth was actually off the track.
And Arabs, the Bedouine Arabs,
Were as astray as the wild shrubs.
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Yasmin Khan 23 August 2013

A writing that stands apart and the age of ignorance is narrated in a compact rhyme. The use of similes 'as astray as the wild shrubs'/.air like the sound of drums.' beautifies the poem. Well-done Sir!

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