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very good one regardless i di not understand the middle verses but overall i like it.

yeah, this is also nice piece luwi

aghrrrrrrrrrrrr! ! ! ! new language! ! ! ! okay my friend i will write in arabic and i will invite you to read it..........do you understand arabic? ? ? well i think you do....because you are increadible and super.....

Dumo arigato, Ahmad san. I'm flattered you dedicate this piece in my name. I feel proud yah know? . The middle part is written in Nihongin lingo and there are only a couple of words I understood. You're such a great writer 'cause you could write other languages particularly Nihongo. Although I didn't grab the meaning of the whole composition at least I appreciate what you did. Of course the lines written in English were beautiful. Thanks, mate and cheers to you.

a nice flow to this write.

Noel is a very good poet, nice dedication, well written poem, lovely to read............

Excellent triplet of tribute Ahmad and they will all bring pleasure to the recipients I am sure - - - well thought through and well constructed....10 and more from Fay.

'The flowers' hopes are blowing toward the East of Eden / For the love has time for embracing in their hearts / Come and rest with me, my queen's guards / Let us hear doves each other singing' lovely lines for a lovely poet Noel.

Such a nice dedication to our friend and great poet Noel.............

awwwwwwwww very nice

Some verses I can read and some I cannot. I wish I could understand the language, I'm sure its a good poem. Lynn

Some beautiful lines. The last line leaves me with a nice wish and feeling.

A wonderful triplet of beauteous words and this one is particularly emotive...

all the three poems are a hit

Last line is very romantic.

Amazingly unique... love it! 10.

Lovely poem like it

It is bound to be a sweet singing! Well crafted!

such a wonderous feeling settle in the most sensitive heart....a ponder of array of target amongst the queen of the heart.....a bitter and better of mixed emotion to care and love beyond this time...thank for sharing I love it...a 10 +++