Pronunciation 2 Comments

words are wonderful - it seems you take great joy in them.

interesting concept.....if you have a chance, read my poem 'Found In Translation'

tht´s more likely sure this one i like it better

tribute again... nice piece luwi

hey why do you write with many languages? ? ? we aren't very intelligent like you! ! ! haha...anyway if you wrote with the language of the mars it will be wonderful...yea it will.....keep impressing...

My tongue twisted and even stuck up in the roof of my mouth trying to pronounce each strange words. You give me a hard time in this piece. So sorry I couldn't appreciate the composition. However, the stanzas written in English is quite admirable. Thanks

i find this one excellent. the last stanza said it all. 'you could leave each moment on repeat and never distinctly feel a beginning or and ending apart from your glimpse generated.' a ten

Wonderful dedication to Almedia, well written poem......

An interesting dedication to Almedia. Adorable.

great tribute to Mr. Knight.............wel expressed thoughts!

Creative! ..........................

A very well written poem, Again I don't read the language, sorry. Lynn

A lovely dedicatoin for Almedia. A moment stretched into eternity....

One look can speak a million words.

Well written, fantastic! 10.

Good pronunciation it comes from the mind..., nice work.

Oh! well pronounced dedication!

whisper my thought for the soul rebirth the immortality of your presence....so touching to believe....a true oneness of feeling.... God bless...a 10 +++

For a glimpse of your heart is worth more then rubies. Boomwhisperer Ruerd

For a glimpse of your heart is worth more then rubies. Boomwhisperer Ruerd