Dejected and frustrated I was thinking,
man will not survive,
he is no more alive,
but when I saw your up-climbing,
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Children are our hope and joy...... the builders of our future! We, elders can stand and proudly watch their accomplishments and the heights they conquer! Enjoyed this poem of hope with a lovely picture!
Awesome poem on hope and courage.....I liked the way you started the poem and by end it became a true magic...Loved it Janab.
man will rise to the highest heights, the child is knight of the knights, and when I saw your reach at your destination, I saluted your courage and your perfection.......Fantastic feeling shared. Beautiful poem.
The poem emits rays of hope... the child is knight of the knights... they are the possibilities. wonderful!
Promising future is very interesting poem shared here. Hopeful surviving is nice in theme shared. Special care should be taken for children. Thought provoking and wonderful poem with excellent expression.10
Great! ! ! 10 on 10.....................