Wednesday, August 5, 2009

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could you make this pain go away?
could you fill my empty heart?
and promise we'll never be apart?
promise me you'll never leave,
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Ashley Nichol
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Danny H 05 August 2009

promise you'll love me no matter what i do, and ill promise to love only you! ! ! Those last lines were the best, they wrapped up the poem quite beautifuly.

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Blessing Nanier 05 August 2009

oh soo sweet. i almost cried

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