***promises*** Comments

This is a beautiful romantic poem, Soft sensual read. Lovely! ; D

Mimzy, you have expressed your feelings beautifully and innocently. May yours and your loved one's dreams come true...Naseer

Another fine exhibit of your ability to tug at the Reader's heartstrings...through, tightly wound stanzaec architecting, and stellar use of contemporary free-style verse...(1st stanza/1st line...promised, should be promise, as you are employing this word as a noun...not an verb or adverb) Otherwise...very well done, indeed, young lady, as usual! *F j R*

The emotion of this poem is very true, you express some feelings about love, thank you for sharing it with me!

Thank you for pointing me to this.You have a way with words that make eyes and heart both read your work.Kev

Yes, you are really doing well with the style of your poems.Do keep it up and, keep on writing.Thank you.Bye. Edward Kofi Louis

do dreams come true..i wonder... another beautiful write ma'am, you've good talent to make readers to feel the words of your poem...keep writting and sharing 10 rgds asif

This poem is beautifully written. Romantic poem with deep emotion. I like it. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

so truly sweet and romantic with deep emotional content. thanks, melvin

i love it...very sweet.....and it expressed great /true feelings...this is my kind of poetry....where feelings are being expressed freely...Keep it up...my 10 for you...

Beautiful! Very sweet and well written.

ohhh.......that is so sweet....well penned

yah! such a promise would only be true when everything is tested by time... love is what we offer, life is what we give... trust is to live beyond time... thats... love and life begin.... your poem is so inspiring to reflect.... i love it... thank you.... God bless

well done and inspiring with hope 10 promises are an exceptionable ability which sets us apart from the animal kingdom those lovely species are able to some degree do much that we do but are unable to promise, thus hold it sacred that we can promise

Crossing continents, flying to you and thats love all might................pickering your heart.nice piece Mimzy! !

Smooth, inveterating, display of passion, and union....Very Nicely Done, young lady! fjr

an instrospective write..well done...A10 Ency Bearis