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Broken promises made her weep.
Promises that he failed to keep.
He promised to always be loving and true.
And that he would never do anything to make her blue.
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Lamar, this promise-breaker sounds as if he could be the same man in my latest poem! I've been reading your poetry for so long now, that I wonder if your writing style hasn't influenced me- - story-telling poems with shady characters. Please read my 'Vlad the Bad', and let me know what you think!
Yup.....there are some out there like that! A nicely crafted write that sums it up!
Lamar, such a well crafted poem......................
Broken promises made her weep. Promises that he failed to keep........pragmatic expression! I have heard one thing... If to keep, keep your promise. This beautiful poem reminds me of the quote! Well penned dear poet....10
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9/10/2025 10:46:02 PM # 1.0.0
Well some with ulterior motives do such horrible things and those who break their promises are true liars. Nice poem on love betrayal.10+++