Saturday, April 23, 2005

Promises Comments

Rating: 3.3

The ocean promises
To wash away the pain
Vowing to free me
From wild thoughts
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Elizabeth Russell
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Scarborough Gypsy 06 February 2006

This is a terrible poem. Dreadful! sloppy, unfeeling, no flow at all. Elizabeth, You know I am joking don't you and that I am your biggest fan? I just thought I should write something different for a change.Ha, ha. I loved this poem. It made me feel the icey sea cleansing me of all the hurt and confusion. Love Gyps PS I did not give you this stupid score that the morons have been tampering with.

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