Friday, August 17, 2012

Promises Comments

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He sharpened his tongue before he came
I had ears shielded with understanding
Innocently I had follied, too horizontal
 He was vertically vexed
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Stevie Taite
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Pranab K Chakraborty 19 August 2012

I cannot act to save my life......... perhaps love can't tolerate any acting. In this regard, poet has done its extreme perhaps. Much lucid the expression with finest words. Spontaneous and nice. Thank you.....Pranab k c 10

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

This is another amazing, insightful piece Stevie, Very well penned and poignant. You impress me! Great Ink! -Kelly.

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