Sunday, June 19, 2011

Promised To Be Kept To Keep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Secrets...
That are kept,
Are secrets...
That may be wept.
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 June 2011

Great poem. Nice sentiments. Skilfully conceived. Rich in imagery. I liked it. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2 if you wish.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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