Friday, October 19, 2007

Promise When Veiled Comments

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Promise when veiled
Love is a shadow of the time
As mystic as moon or the mist
glistening blush of the red rose
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Ewigi Liebe 21 October 2007

A very nice promise...love as mystery....whatever comes for someone who^d make away...dreams come true......full of hope nothing less than an answer. another one of my favorite. thanks for sharing, Mary :)

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Patrice James 20 October 2007

this is a very nice promise, nice penned...thanks for sharing.

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Thad Wilk 19 October 2007

A nice smooth flow to this poem, enjoyable reading! (10) ! Thad

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