Saturday, May 26, 2012

Promise Of A New Day Comments

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Promise of a new day

My faith is weathering like the corps of a rusty iron
I think my extremity has been reached
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Godfrey Morris
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Valsa George 04 August 2012

If winter comes, can spring be far behind? ? May all dark clouds vanish and your sky brighten up! ! A great write.....! Also thank you for your words of appreciation! !

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Lizzie O'neill 07 June 2012

This poem is lovely.. it shows we never know whats whats coming with the promise of a new day... inspiring

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Valerie Dohren 05 June 2012

Lovely poem - hope you find your treasure, hope springs eternal as they say.

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Eyerusalem Tesfaye 04 June 2012

Beautifull words. I love it

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Sharad Juneja 31 May 2012

A very nice poem...u really know how to express ur feelings and emotions..beautiful one

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Vincent Kuo 27 May 2012

Wow, beautiful poem! Haha I am honestly surprised, I just wrote a poem called Break of Dawn with a similar theme! They say Great minds things alike or is it Fools never differ hahaha. Anyways, I'd like to invite you to read my Break of Dawn

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Anita Sehgal 27 May 2012

Another day will arise! well said

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Dave Walker 26 May 2012

A fantastic poem, like it.

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Dave Walker 26 May 2012

A really great poem, really like it, a great write.

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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